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You may find me where the green gentle grass lies sleeping For I shall be there healing wounds by their weeds weeping You may also find me near where waters wilfully wander As I watch the skies for the calculating carnivorous condor You may find me in the vinaceous valleys visualizing my dreams For I sail swiftly aboard their silent saddened streams You may also find me under the towering Trembling Aspen trees As I bravely bond with and ingest the beguiled breeze You may find me lively lucidly listening to rhythm’s of the sphere For I meticulously marvel music the wonder that I hear You may also find me in the habitable harmonic healing caves As the earthly echo embraces my soul that it saves I am now found on the magical mystical mountains high Where abundant ambient Angels keep a watchful eye. March.14.2016 For Contest --- Where will they find you--- By Marugu Mo

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Date: 3/19/2016 8:51:00 PM
Winged, a magical write, very nice for the contest, a winner to me and I am loving this 7 !
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/20/2016 5:31:00 AM
Thank you my dear Wings...your kind dark words are greatly appreciated and your presence even more...^WW^
Date: 3/17/2016 6:48:00 PM
My goodness, this one is so elegant compared to the one I wrote!! I think the judge will only love MY entry if he or she is a pure realist!! This one shows great imagination and poetic skill!
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you my dear Andrea...but beauty is in the eye of the beholder...and I'm sure you behold lots of beauty...and your verses are only pure awesomeness...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/17/2016 6:47:00 PM
In answer to your question at the breathtaking poem, yes, I am WELL over 18. hahaha. And wishing i were not. Let me see this poem now.
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:26:00 PM
Can you show me your driver's license and registration Miss lol...^WW^
Date: 3/17/2016 1:33:00 PM
You have a great ear for meter, and a pen well attuned to alliteration (awesome!). The place where you reside sounds magical (I don't know if I'd want to be found, but rather let me thoughts ponders).
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Date: 3/17/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Timothy...me too...but according to the contest that's what they want...^WW^
Date: 3/15/2016 9:50:00 AM
very descriptive and flowing with sensitive impressions... fine work, WW..huggs
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Date: 3/15/2016 10:05:00 AM
Thank you my friend nette...your presence is greatly appreciated...god bless...(:^WW^:)
Date: 3/15/2016 5:43:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet, WW. Your geographical descriptions paint perfect pictures. Excuse my alliteration but I only used it to show that the amount of it you chose to use enhances your sonnet, whereas I feel any more would detract. I love this one!
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you my dear Lady Lin...your right any more would detract...just the right amount to be descriptive...I'm learning from the best here at Poetry Soup...you # 1...with admiration...^WW^
Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 PM
^WW^...Your way with words and the images they create make these places come to life! Reading enjoyment you do provide!!! :-)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/15/2016 3:14:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend Walter...and your poetic words inspire nations...like the sonnet before this one...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/14/2016 9:54:00 PM
Great alliteration in your wonderfully written sonnet, WW! I really enjoyed this :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/14/2016 11:21:00 PM
Thank you dear Laura...always a pleasure to feel your presence...and a wonderful good evening to you my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
Another feather in the back of your artist's cap. Great job, WW. Just keep slingin' it! Peace my friend:)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/14/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thank you dear Daniel...it's pretty windy in those mountains...don't know if my cap will fly off lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 3/14/2016 9:15:00 PM
Excellent write WW...love the ending couplet.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 3/14/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thank you my friend Tim...my fave to...god bless...with admiration...^WW^

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