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I Am Alone

In the crowd I am lonely, empty faces pass on the street. I yearn to smell the perfume of want and the heady taste of fulfillment. In the bus I am the only passenger, I ride to the end of the line and back, Looking for a heart and a home.. and recognition… see my face. The grass is wet beneath my feet… I walk from here to there and find a way back. Looking for a light to show the way to a door that opens with my approach. The streets are full but always empty. Only the wind hears my petition. Perhaps fate was written on pages from a book written in the sand.
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Date: 1/16/2014 11:45:00 PM
Very lonely indeed. I noted your comment to Andrea after I read it, and re-reading it, I loved the poem that much more. I too like to write about people and things I have seen in my daily routine that have such an effect on me. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:46:00 PM
gosh, this is profound, Barbara. I really like this!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/16/2014 9:52:00 PM
thanks dear....I rewrote an old poem for the contest. I saw a man on a bus once who looked so lonely...I have never forgotten him...

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