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I Am Alcoholic

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I Am Alcoholic

I Am Alcoholic
to regulate my soul 
   my thoughts 
    are doomed
Defeated my entity 
dictated my pleasure's 
I am Alcoholic
I sense it's tantrum 
I am helpless
 yesterday today 
help me? 

My unique enemy 
haunted since years
by my Mother
my shadow 
my brain
my tears 
my vitality 
it torment 
my darkness 
dictated my pain

I was born
with a heart
I cannot find it 
how weak have 
I gone down
 The ladder
How desperate 
have I allowed 
 Be taken 
for granted 
  by a bottle
 I became 
so wounded
Giving up 
my strength
My life
To a glass. 

Therese Bacha
29 June 2013

Copyright © Therese Bacha

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  1. Date: 9/13/2014 10:12:00 PM
    Fine use of imagery brings this piece to life in ones mind as your words walk the reader through this well expressed poem

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 9/13/2014 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello, thank you so much for passing by. I so much enjoyed reading your heartfelt review.I have been away from PoetrySoup, but hopefully soon I will come back. Bless you. Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:16:00 PM
    Very deep write...i have too written many on "Addiction", if you feel up to reading, see :Addicted..the Untold War". I have many more...just not as easily shared. I SO ENJOYED! -Kelli

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 9/10/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for passing by, I will visit your web site. Just came back , having so much to do. Bless u Terry
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 10:37:00 AM
    nicely done Therese, you have an awesome day ;},,,, I just wrote / posted one called " Alcohol " after I read yours ;}

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 9/10/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debbie, sorry for the delay, I was away for a while. Thank you for passing by. Bless u Terry
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Another powerful write honest and inspiring...thank you...

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 7/7/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Donna, I am happy you liked it, I also enjoyed writing it. Terry xxxxx
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:23:00 AM
    The effects of any addiction is horrible for the person who is addicted and those that touch on that person..I have seen that first hand..There are people who are born everyday with the genetic dispositon to become an addict because it is in their genes..The way to avoid the addiction is know oneself and seek out professionals to help with the problem..Enjoyed reading this one and your point of view about your family member who has a problem or was it had..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/5/2013 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the visit to my work..Have a great day.. Sara
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:13:00 PM
    I know this pain! You must be strong and you can be strong. This may sound silly but I gave up drinking and later cigarettes Because It dawned on me one day I was making People rich while they were killing me and helping me destroy everything I loved . It's never easy but the thought that people were getting rich on my misery really made me angry. Fight on again and again never surrender!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 7/4/2013 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so right, I never saw it that way, as I smoke, I will try and imitate you by making them become poor, and for me I will become healthier. Excellent advice Michael. thank you so much. Have a great happy evening. Love Terry
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Hi Terry; This touches close to home. There was about three people in my family that were Alcoholics. One died and two got cured. Thank God for A.A. Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 7/2/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Lucy, Yes I know, as I suffered with my brother who passed away. Hope you are very good. Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:36:00 AM
    This write spoke such truth my friend, my sister is trying to break free from the confines of alcohol and I saw her within those lines that you have so illustriously written here my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful and outstanding piece, Great Work!!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 7/1/2013 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So sorry Russell to read that, I did not want to make that poem very strong. But unfortunately it does hurt those who are on the outside. Take care, hope she does.