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I Am a Worm In Spring

I'm the worm Persephone’s minions found; Blackbirds drinking from Apollo’s brewery Warbled their songs into my gloomy bedroom, For the Feast of Spring. New verse created 6 April 2015 for Sapphic Stanza #3 contest

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Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2015 7:59:00 AM

Michael, I like your poem although I am no expert on shappic stanza writing, I think it is a good entry for the contest, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Michael Dom
Date: 4/7/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thanks BW, I'm sure there are a few things to sort in this one, but I liked the way this composition ended. Maybe fix it later - sometimes it's the journey that's important and not the destination.