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I Am a Raven

Crafty, conniving, sly and stately, I am associated with dead and lost souls, An ominous bird of yore spawning myths and legends, A messenger of deities in the mortal world, I am a wily mediator between life and death-- Dreaded but revered nonetheless! I showed Cain how to bury his murdered brother, Abel, Perched on the shoulder of the god, Odin, A royal resident of the Tower of London, I hobnob with sorcerers and saints with monarchs and mendicants; With beady eyes and lustrous ebony plumage I am mantled in a grave aura of foreboding. Take heed when I fly across your path, Perched just above his chamber door I made Poe fella famous evermore! Raven=magic, shape-shifting, creation. "Picture yourself as a Bird" contest by Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 5/26/2015 12:41:00 PM
Hi Abdul, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your very informative poem about the raven! Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:56:00 PM
You portrayed the raven to perfection! Congrats on your win, Abdul! Love, Kim
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/26/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Appreciate much. I just wanted to credit a bird where credit was due.
Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 5:33:00 AM
Bet you could write interesting stories with this imagination. Very Poe etic
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/24/2015 10:24:00 AM
You bet! Raven is the most interesting bird--Poe etically speaking!
Date: 5/24/2015 4:26:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:14:00 PM
love this
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Date: 5/23/2015 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/24/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, if I May?!
Date: 5/23/2015 8:41:00 PM
some wickedly good symbolism for that bird!! Nicely done. Had you used fewer commas, this would have soared higher! Congrats in my contest.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/25/2015 2:52:00 PM
Ha! I am woebegone / A set of commas brought me down / I rue for the days of yore / When the soul and not the appearance mattered more!
Date: 5/17/2015 7:31:00 PM
Splendid. Made me smile with the reference to Poe's The Raven. Your raven deserves a seven...:-)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/18/2015 1:01:00 PM
I envy Poe, though. He's more popular than Raven!
Date: 5/15/2015 8:34:00 PM
I like how you brought in Poe at the end...Great write....
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2015 9:04:00 AM
Man, Poe is always on my mind!
Date: 5/15/2015 6:14:00 PM
Oh well done! love the ending. BG
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Barbara. Appreciate much.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/15/2015 6:19:00 PM
Do you ever sleep? Thanks Jan.
Date: 5/15/2015 5:34:00 PM
great personification you chose a great bird to portray - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/16/2015 9:03:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your husband. I wish for his speedy recovery. But m'lady, you have to take care of yourself too. Remember Linda? Don't overstress yourself. Always appreciate your comments.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 6:25:00 PM
yes lol but sadly not well Abdul haven't slept well since my hubby had his cancer surgery in 2013:-( hugs jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
Do you ever sleep? Thanks Jan.

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