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I Am a Hawk

Rising suns I glide below, With shadow small cast from my wings. Warm air lifting begins to grow. I'll ride slow winds of cosmic strings. Splay my feathers and looking down, Circling over life on Earth. My distinct cry of renown, Will claim each day for all it's worth. Silent search, eyes subtle motion. Seeks each detail of ground and tree. Hunter high, with no emotion. And tail of red, far from the sea contest... Picture yourself as a bird Hawk..visionary power,guardianship, messenger 5/10/15

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Date: 5/28/2015 7:33:00 AM
Powerful image of hawk you have created with your poem. Congratulations on your win, Frederic! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading of the winning writes.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:53:00 PM
Great descriptive write, Frederic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:25:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:13:00 PM
good win
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:39:00 PM
You created a lovely picture of the hawk as he flies overhead. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/12/2015 3:20:00 PM
Great imagery and nice use of words... shows the ferocity of the bird and how it views earth as its domain... a7 ... best wishes for the contest.. nadiya
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:16:00 PM
Nice imagery and movement, Frederic! I especially like cosmic strings, gives me a marionette feel...
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Date: 5/10/2015 4:21:00 PM
you are flying high with this wonderful write Frederic - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:42:00 PM
smooth and flowing with just the right metaphors and images, frederick.. fly high!.. superb!.. huggs
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:30:00 PM
Niiieece
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