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I don't see any problem with my world, What is it so wrong with my world anyway? If I choose to have a big smile, Instead of wearing, just a frown. I just want to be Clown So I don't have to pretend, I want to see the world pink,instead of blue With a lot of smiles, instead of sad frowns.... As for my myself, I just want to laugh, And ignore together, all my worries! I just want to ride in a merry-go-'round And make people happy, instead of sad. You might think that something, is very wrong with me, But it doesn't really matter, does it? Because I still love to see rainbows everywhere, And see smiles upon every face. Because I still want to be a clown! And hide all my problems,behind my clown mask. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,14,2014

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Date: 11/18/2014 11:58:00 AM
Very nice, Dorian. I remember an old song, "Look On the Sunny Side of Life." My mother was a very positive person, and I learned to be so from watching her reactions to everyday upsets.
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:08:00 AM
Sometimes I wish I had been a clown, though being a really good clown is no joke! Enjoyed this write of yours Dorian; may you keep seeing rainbows everywhere:) /x/ paul
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Date: 11/16/2014 9:09:00 AM
Enjoyed this one, especially the woven thread of unrest hidden under the clown.Smoothly blended and a good read.Thanks much
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:21:00 PM
Dorian, Most well-done indeed. This one is a Super 7+++++!! and a FAV. And I really like the image of the Clown above. Keep Writing -- Your doing a most marvelous job!!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:12:00 PM
7+++ You've started me thinking about using images with my poems! This one's a perfect fit! Lovely upbeat, happy poem my dearest sweet Dorian! Loving sweet hugs, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/15/2014 4:57:00 PM
This made me smile so much Dorian - wonderful descriptive poem supported by a great image:-) Hugs jan x
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