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I Am a Dandelion

I Am /A Dandelion I stem out to a beautiful flower dressed in yellow, with a milky latex that runs in my veins. Omitting a fragrant perfume of my own. As the night falls, I close and slumber till sunrise. Like a caterpillar turning into a butterfly, I’m standing tall with downy white feathery fine hair. As a gentle cool breeze whispers with a kiss, I surrender my fruit to fall into its hands. Swept away and drifts like little propellers with the wind, like a thief in the night whisking them away over long distances Out to their lovers as they mate with the rich brown soil. ©By: Eve Roper 5/3/2015 Dandelion late Middle English: from French dent-de-lion, translation of medieval Latin dens leonis ‘lion's tooth’ (because of the jagged shape of the leaves). Contest : Picture Yourself as a Flower! Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 5/10/2015 7:07:00 AM
Wonderful choice, The dandelion is more than a weed, these little beauties are way more complex, your write showed so many positive characteristics of a dandelion and was a pleasure to read. :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:17:00 PM
Eve, this is awesome.... If I ever was a flower I'd be the bluebonnet. :) Linda
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thank you,Linda, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Bluebonnet state flower is perfect but my bluebonnet poem didn't make it . Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/9/2015 6:32:00 PM
Eve, this one's the most popular on this contest. CONGRATULATIONS on the win. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thank you,Skat, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Date: 5/9/2015 5:03:00 PM
Love the metaphors you used. Great write, Eve! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thank you,Kim, so much for the inspiring compliment Blessings Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Date: 5/9/2015 9:35:00 AM
Ha, another Dandelion lover! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thank you,Abdul, blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/9/2015 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Eve
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thank you,Joseph, for the congratulations. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/9/2015 6:38:00 AM
Beautifully written!Congrats on your win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thank you,Kash, for the congratulations and your compliement . Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/9/2015 5:28:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:42:00 PM
Thank you,Jan , for the congratulations. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/9/2015 1:47:00 AM
Eve, this is so cute! Except for line 9, i thought this was a perfectly crafted dandelion poem!! Thanks for supporting my contest. congrats to you.
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Date: 5/9/2015 9:39:00 PM
Thank you,Andrea, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did did fix it my dear friend. Thank you again:~) Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Date: 5/5/2015 6:50:00 PM
Beautifully penned Eve...a 7...hugs
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Date: 5/4/2015 11:38:00 AM
Sweet Eve....thank you for your lovely visit today. You are a pretty flower...The dandelion is a lovely take on the contest theme. I loved the second stanza....my favorite part. It's wispy and dreamy...and makes one want to live in the moment. I've been away for a while, and can't be back full swing yet, but I wanted to pass by and thank you for being an amazing friend. Hugs....
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2015 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen, so much for the wonderful inspiring compliment I did need that my dear friend. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve and Happy Mother's Day
Date: 5/4/2015 9:46:00 AM
An interesting face put on an old nemesis known as the Dandelion. Pretty yes, but also a nuisance weed. "Out to the their lovers " typo?
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2015 9:44:00 PM
Thank you, Emile, I'm always missing typos, I'm very grateful. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 5/4/2015 6:10:00 AM
Thank you for wishing me luck in the contest, Eve. And the same right back a ya. I love to see the bright and cheerful yellow dandelions. A joy to read your poem, and a 7 rating.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/4/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, but a compliment I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and also thank you for rating. Blessings Eve
Date: 5/4/2015 3:20:00 AM
- If you were a flower ..... I'd picked you! - Beautifully, dear Eve - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2015 8:32:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I love your beautiful avatar, you're such a beautiful lady. Thank you for your compliment and the good luck. Blessings and hugs Eve
Date: 5/4/2015 2:23:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Eve good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/4/2015 8:34:00 AM
Jan, thank you for your wonderful support and being there for me with a good. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/3/2015 11:09:00 PM
Wild and free...great imagery Eve...good luck Tim
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/4/2015 8:25:00 AM
Tim, thank you for your compliment and good. Blessings dear friend Eve

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