I Am

Better off Dead

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Terrell Martin

Date: 11/16/2014 7:43:00 AM

Arthur, an interesting little piece of poetry which certainly emits a response...one of the goals of poetry, no doubt. If you enjoy mind-expanding books as much as I do consider the following: The Purpose Guided Universe by Richard Haisch; One Mind - Larry Dossey, MD; Reincarnation in Christianity - Geddes MacGregor and finally, How Long is Now by Tim Freke. (This book WILL change the way you see the world)! Cheers, Terry

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/24/2014 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Terrel, Merry Christmas!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/13/2014 1:19:00 AM

really? buddy arthur dead?? no oh no :P sure you will still live long.. :D!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2014 8:09:00 AM

i can :D

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/13/2014 9:41:00 PM

Only if I eat my Spinach!!! Who will make me do that?

Katrina Monique Cayanan

Date: 11/9/2014 10:59:00 PM

No, I guess your better of writing some more! you put humor on quite sensible manner. :) Have a nice day Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/13/2014 9:39:00 PM

Thanks for your support Katrina!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2014 3:01:00 AM

Better off than what???? You will have no means of spending all that insurance money. We would be far less entertained and a bunch of people would be sad (myself included). Good night Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/13/2014 9:38:00 PM

You are so kind as usual Richard, this was just part 1 and due to a darn power failure, I lost the rest, and for the life of me I couldn't re-write it!