I Am

I am mother (father) sister daughter Favourite aunt, SELDOM rant Pan Flute player, dragon slayer Own nothing pink, at least I think Teach Sunday school, kids find that cool I am not to lean, I’m sure you’ve seen Curly hair, I seldom swear But if I do, God help you Sing in a choir, now I’m on fire Love my dog, I want a blog I am very kind, at least in my mind Love good movies, never been much of a sleaze I just gave you a look inside my book So for now I take a bow. I am female Sorry I just found a fluffy beautiful pink bath robe. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 11.06.2014 Frank Herrera’s Contest: I am 2nd

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/17/2014 5:39:00 PM

You remind me of my favorite aunt! She is always fun. There is never a dull moment when she's around... It was nice to read this poem and learn more about you, Brenda. Good work! Congrats on your win!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/14/2014 2:19:00 PM

Enjoyed the insight into your personality.. I laughed at your last line. Im not a pink person either, but I have some pink socks..lol. BG

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2014 1:16:00 PM

This is lovely, clever and witty! enjoyable internal rhyme; congratulations. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/12/2014 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations, Brenda! I enjoyed reading about you. That last line made me smile. Every girl has a little pink hiding somewhere! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/11/2014 8:28:00 PM

This is so effin creative...an internal rhyme...the set up early on the pink robe...A great write, Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 8:59:00 PM

Effin, what's that? That in itself is hilarious. Thanks Maurice.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/11/2014 7:29:00 PM

Hi Brenda, stopping by again for congratulations on your win for your great poem. Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for stopping back Sandra. XOXO

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/11/2014 6:56:00 PM

It flows smooth like a river. Nicely written. I like it.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Abdul.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/11/2014 3:58:00 PM

Poetess Brenda, you just know how to keep bringing them on! Congratulations, my friend, on yet another great win with this sweet, witty portrayal of yourself! Well-deserved! Pandita

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 5:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Pandita

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/11/2014 12:08:00 PM

I had to give a little giggle at that last line !! Enjoyed your poem and congrats on your win !!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 5:03:00 PM

:). Thanks Debra.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/11/2014 10:35:00 AM

Yeah! I have seen the curly hair,so nice a Poem;congrats Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 5:02:00 PM

Thanks Kayod5

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/11/2014 6:30:00 AM

a great insight into you Brenda yet you are also far more as is shown in your poems congrats on win hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Shadow. I have a feeling most of us have so much more.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2014 1:18:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Jan. XOXO

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2014 1:04:00 AM

I am proud of you, an excellent poem and win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:25:00 AM

Ah, thanks Richard.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/10/2014 1:07:00 PM

Brenda, love your humorous "I am," and the way you used rhymes! Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Sandra

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/9/2014 10:09:00 PM

Brenda, A wonderful write here. I wish you the best in the contest. Good Luck!! All the Best, Gary

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Gary.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2014 10:18:00 PM

brenda, your bio is the most ENTERTAINING of all the ones I have seen. How I wish I had read this one before the contest closed. I would love to have imitated your style of rhyme here doing one for myself. DANG , too late for the contest now@!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:10:00 PM

It filled up very fast. I just made it. I'm glad you like it though.

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 11/7/2014 7:32:00 PM

very nice poem. good luck in the contest

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Jasmine

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/7/2014 5:56:00 PM

I forgot to mention I love Nutella and bananas on Eggo waffles or crêpes.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/7/2014 5:16:00 PM

beautifully penned brenda smiling

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:08:00 PM

Thank you Liam

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/7/2014 9:20:00 AM

Indeed you are. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your poem.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Richard.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/7/2014 5:21:00 AM

You are great and the twist at the end....I'm smiling..... Hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Tim. I hoped people could smile. I didn't mention I was humorous but I guess the whole poem pointed in that direction.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/7/2014 5:09:00 AM

Very cool piece Brenda! I really like it and you made laugh reading many of your humorous lines.lol..curly hair...I seldom swear....sing in a choir...now I 'm on fire. Just my kind of humor, my dear friend. You rock wit this one..and it's so good to know more about you. GL in the contest! :) love and hugs! xxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Dorian. :-).

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/6/2014 11:55:00 PM

Nice to get to know you even better my friend, I also love the dragon slayer part of your work, I'm not a big pink fan either lol great piece here good luck in the contest take care, I think you have a winner here though, cheri glad you liked Clyde also.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 6:51:00 AM

You would love the bath robe though. It just so soft.

David Meade

Date: 11/6/2014 8:27:00 PM

I love your humor was laughing while I was reading . . . my favorite was the SELDOM rant and dragon slayer! I wish I was in your sunday school class!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thanks so much David. I am quite entertaining and the kids love me, but I love them more!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/6/2014 7:38:00 PM

Awwwwww glad to know you a bit better! Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 10:19:00 PM

Thanks Debbie.