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Written: February 22, 2024 _______________________________________ Divine dole of daytime, distinct as it came. Fetch forward in finding your felicity flame. A gap in the gloominess, nyctalopia oblivion. Conceived desired, ordered; igniting obsidian The Genesis of light shined wisdom for ages. It guides groundwork to grand, grungy stage. We must explore voids to imagine artwork. To set forth our vision, we require acrid work. We vividly velocipede what we visualized. Our will and views foretell as initialized. Synergy of idea, will, and word is powerful. To shine a bright light through the power shell. Spreading shimmers and shaping shiny stars. And I hope amid them all, a bright light is ours. Similar to the sun, radiating brilliant light. Stars disguise by day and emerge at night! I am ambitious, inspired, and desired. Aiming to grow upon what is yet aspired. Be greater than I could be right to endow. A superlative person then I will infer how. I am driven, committed, and liberated. Have the freedom not to be obliterated. Ideas that could transform the world. For betterment of humankind, unfurled. I am untamed, never harmed or maimed. My words sing, and your ears ring famed. No matter how I impanel to color or sweeten,  Similes, hyperboles, and signs are beacons.  As it becomes apparent, the plot takes shape. Through all that, the truth frees me to escape. Despite the discomfort it brings, I am aware. For the sake of my soul, in time I will be there. I have the innate ability to never destroy. Instruct the beauty inside me, then deploy. I am zealous and living a huge, utterly powerful. I'm plagued by those who refuse to be prayerful. You provide me with strength and quixotic I feed, bleed, need you; we are symbiotic. Giving, taking, reaping, and sowing are the same. We assist each other with yelling and even games. Your backing keeps me writing and striving. Not to rest on past success, we are contriving. Adorned and united in the sacred embrace. That's what I am, and I'm proud of it: grace.

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Date: 2/23/2024 10:36:00 AM
A poem full of wisdom with introspective tone. Great poem for any occasion. GL in contest.
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:06:00 PM
Enjoyed much this highly introspective poem. A beautiful assessment and evaluation of yours coming from a contented heart! You know what your strengths are and you polish and perfect them day by day. As ever, your word choice and rhyming skills stand out. "I am ambitious, inspired, and desired.Aiming to grow upon what is yet aspired. Be greater than I could be right to endow. A superlative person then I will infer how." This is how we too feel about you. Great entry for the Contest. All the Best, dear Lasaad!
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:00:00 PM
So much wisdom- an introspective tone,I inspiring diction
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Date: 2/22/2024 3:04:00 PM
even before I read the last line of your poem, I was struck with a feeling of grace and power in your words, dear Sotto. Your outstanding rhyming skill coupled with your passion for words made for a soulful read. You have a unique way of addressing the contest prompt divulging who you are and what abilities you have. Many of the lines appealed to me, but these were captivating: You provide me with strength and quixotic I feed, bleed, need you; we are symbiotic.The last verse was brilliant! Sara
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:35:00 PM
This must be for a contest because I am seeing so many of these with the I am. If so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for stopping by my page with congratulations. Sara K
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