I Am - All Woman

~ Who am I ~ The epitome of independent ~ definition of pain ~ despair ~ heartache ~ love ~ loss ~ and undeniable strength and triumph through it all. ~ Never been perfect and don't want to be ~ Who I am is okay with me. ~ ~ Who I am ~ Complicated ~ Strong Willed ~ Aggressive ~ Blunt ~ Honest ~ Open minded ~ Driven ~ Self-Motivated ~ Optimistic ~ Beautiful ~ Loving ~ Eloquent ~ Poetic ~ and Free... ~ I am All Woman ~ open your eyes, mind, and heart ~ Only then will you see ~ All this woman ~ all of me... Lay

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/1/2011 7:51:00 PM

* “My Joyful Eyes Are Wide Open * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Walayee * I Love Your Beautiful Name * Something About A Name? * I Love Your Honesty In Regards to Perhaps Tad Bits of Possible Imperfections? * I Also Love The Self Awareness, Love & Strength I Find * And As I Have Also Said * I Am Already Aware of How Very Fair Your Beauty Is to Gaze Upon * All Said & Done, Again * My Eyes Are Wide Open * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/17/2011 7:38:00 AM

So well written and a perfect picture of you! Thank you for your kind comment on our win (jack's and mine)....Gert:)

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/2/2011 3:28:00 AM

Strong statements, Lay! You hold true to your convictions by staying true to yourself. Feeling energized by this read...thanks for sharing! Mikki

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 4/30/2011 1:02:00 AM

* yes yes yes * i absolutely love the image of * such strength recognition and beauty * it was as though i could somehow feel * your radiant light * penetrating deep inside my very self * what a wonderful to find amid poetry * a sign of both talent and * complete beauty * keep shining this beautiful light * “You” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2011 1:36:00 PM

Hey Lay..u forgot AWESOME.. my friend.. wonderful entry expressing all u are ..luv.. good luck.. optimistic is my fav as I am same way ..very positive about all and ending with I am all woman.. priceless .. great piece luv.. happy weekend.. good luck...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2011 7:59:00 AM

I bet this describes you perfectly, Lay. There are a lot of free-spirited, independent ladies that men don't understand. Can relate to this message. My late husband used to complain that I was so gosh-darned independent. Still smile thinking of it; he was used to women being very dependent. Nice to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn