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I Always Liked the Rain

I always liked the rain It’s avant-garde disdain Encased in every raindrop Its tauntingly cold chill Trickling off a drippy nose Its million centipede dance steps Puckering the dust, stirring the mud The child like joy of running through puddles Popsicle stick armadas attacked by giants Mud pies with maple twig candles I still enjoy the rain Walk more slowly Savoring its scent The icy edge of its smile Its tear like essence Reminding me That I now walk alone

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Date: 10/21/2023 2:47:00 AM
This has been described so well due to the adjectives you have used...
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Date: 10/20/2023 5:46:00 PM
Sad but so true your words John. My rain dancing days are over This is a lovely poem. Thanks
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:17:00 PM
I enjoyed your rain write. I still enjoy rainy days/nights. Have a fun weekend............
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:14:00 PM
Aww that touched my heart John…resonates as l love the rain also….it invigorates! Debx
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:01:00 PM
A great poem. It sounds like"if rain could talk",and I love it.
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Date: 10/20/2023 12:38:00 PM
I happily walked in a storm today, there's something beautiful about it. I'll ponder this again later - currently out drinking Guinness :) (but it's still stormy)
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