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I Ain'T Done Yet

What does it feel like to no longer exist Does memory linger on, will our soul be missed Do minds still function though our bodies are dust Answers to these queries I'll find out I trust Could be tomorrow, it could be today Here's the bottom line, I don't have much say Hope I'm around for few years to come Hate to succumb if my life here's not done Haven't seen Hawaii or the Taj Mahal Cruised the Danube, seen China's Great Wall The Eiffel Tower is still on my list Ireland's blarney stone I haven't yet kissed Hate to miss a trip to the land down under The Statue of Liberty one of the world's wonders Seems like I should stick around for a while Haven't had the thrill of feeding the crocodiles Perhaps I'll forgo the crocodile thing There's a chance it will hasten my very last fling So all in all, I'll be around for a while Missed seeing these landmarks since I was a child!

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Date: 8/22/2023 3:59:00 PM
Hell Happy Jack, you could go to some of these places yet. Love,\ xxxx-oooo Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/23/2023 3:43:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, right! Some people do not have an wonderful life. I think that you have a wonderful life. Love, Darlene/ xxx-ooo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/23/2023 4:30:00 AM
Very few! Still had a wonderful life! Yahoo! XOX
Date: 8/22/2023 12:50:00 PM
...a 'full-loss-of-why' (andt, who, what, when, where) and you've blended right in......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2023 1:29:00 PM
Many descriptors... I'm at a loss! LOL
Date: 8/22/2023 4:41:00 AM
Well I've been right to the top of the Eiffel twr and kissed the Blarney stone ( my wife tells me I never shut up lol. Hope you're keeping well Jack. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2023 4:52:00 AM
You're doing all the right things Sir Thomas... live young!!!

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