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I Adore the Grey

I Adore the Grey I adore the grey before the dawn, that wave’s good night, beckons day. When lovers rest is deeply drawn, her breathing soft, as flowering May. No curtain flare, just steel blue grey, as she floats there in selfish dreams. Feathered wind chimes have their say, heralding the butter smooth sunbeams. Softly waiting as she slumbers deep, soon the welcome grey must fade. wondering of the thoughts she keep, repelling dark with lights man made. S.de B. © 2012-07-30

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2013 9:16:00 PM

Seosamh, a nice gentle poem and image, ... love the passion..... ps..... thank you for the nice comments. and the condolence. My wish poem"" is still lock deep in me... xox~ Linda

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/29/2013 12:57:00 AM

Thanks Linda, glad you liked it. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/17/2013 8:14:00 AM

Still the pattern .

Seosamh De Burca
Date: 4/20/2013 9:09:00 AM

Thank you for reading and comment. This is an experimental piece trying to capture ACBD style of rhyme.