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I Try

   I try to live my life
       Not being like all the rest
             I try to use a little charm
               That might add a little zest
                  I try to shed love on others
                     So they may know how love feels
                         I try to shower the world in kindness
                             Just to see what it reveals
                                I try to change peoples worlds
                                  From the gloom that they all see
                                         I try to lighten peoples hearts
                                             So their hearts can fly free
                                                  I try to take away the sadness
                                                     That we feel in all our lives
                                                         I try to explain the gift of joy felt
                                                             When your spirit flys
                                                                  I try to show you all of these things
                                                                     But don't do them to impress
                                                                         I try to do all of these things
                                                                            Because I'm not like all the rest

Dan Kearley:11-30-12  :o)

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:58:00 AM
    Very sweet poem from the heart :) Love reading your uplifting words. Keep up the spectacular work!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 5:39:00 AM
    "I try to lighten peoples hearts So their hearts can fly free" wow this is my favorite verse! wow a lovely poem really enjoyed reading it! Have a nice week end, Omneya

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:21:00 PM
    WOW!!! I love this I'm going to like it on f.b & add it to 1 of my fav's great great write Dan :) Could you imagine if we all lived this way...

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:27:00 AM
    this is excellent..and yes you are succeeding through your poetry..

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Hi Danny Boy you are certainly not like the rest my friend you are an original a one off, great write, have a great weekend, all the best Big O

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:16:00 AM
    Very nice.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:53:00 PM
    And you do it very well, my friend.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 12:27:00 PM
    I think you are probably doing very well with all these Dan, just love it xx

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Hi Dan,,, how are you wishing you all the best...always..and thank you for your stopping by with you nice comments...and here another valuable lesson for all the readers. nice share..wonderful poem.. enjoyed <3<3<3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Dan, it is very good 'to try', especially to try to do the things you've described... but most people are just 'trying'... ;-) Terry (Nice poem)

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 9:28:00 PM
    WOW! this is really heart felt. I like the presentation of the way it is written. I love it!!!! Awesome Job Dan.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:24:00 AM
    I imagine the colors of the rainbow under the shape you created with your words. I agree you are not like the rest. Enjoyed your poem Dan

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 4:48:00 PM
    I dont think a guy like you has to try too hard Dan, i think it comes naturally to you as a gift from God, embrace it, run with it, and watch the smiles, great job my friend

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:43:00 PM
    - S-mail !!!!!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:55:00 AM
    Because you try, it is your success my friend. Success is not measured by money, or prestigue... love ya man, Cindy

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:19:00 AM
    This is very sweet, Dan. I can see from things you say here that you are a feeling person!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:29:00 AM
    You are a charmer Dan... well written piece my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Wow :-) u r wonderful in words. Hugs x shaz

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:01:00 AM
    Dan this is just so cool, I love the format as well as the words, very well done...David

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:03:00 AM
    If only everyone could think like you do Dan ..... the world would be like a heaven on earth. - Love it .... beautifully written! - Wishing you a relaxed and lovely weekend. - oxox f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 11/30/2012 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne-Lise..OXOX f.e.f :o) Your one of those people too.<3