I Thy Destiny

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A being has arrived on earth with his FAMILY OF brothers to welcome the chosen

Population among the human race. He is telling them THAT he is theIR DESTINY.

Observe the mystery. I thy destiny, I thy fate. Said HE. Squeeze thy PALMS with faith Mark the swirling path. Wrench it STRAIGHT. WASH your FACE at the living well. Quench thy thirst. Let thy feet travel from thy dwelling PLACE I thy destiny watch thy fate. Solemn is the race. Sacred is its place with the servitude and Joy in all the HEAVENS MY BELOVE. LANGUISH and lead to the LIVING well. Not be it secret, ancient ones tell. Ashes to ashes. Dust to dust. 'Til TIME collected with rust. I am slow to RECOGNIZE he who breeds Another heir to NOTHINGNESS. I thy destiny know thy GRACE. Often times one cannot calculate his own FORTUNE. Stand erect. Concentrate. Confiscate the hearts of man abiding with us. 'Lo the SIRIUS STAR twirling. The Lords of the CONSTELLATIONS have Spoken. Your REDEMPTION IS AT HAND. I thy destiny. Said them In unison. STAND AS ONE

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/28/2015 12:03:00 AM

A very interesting write....destiny speaks. I wonder about some of the lines which clearly speak of Biblical themes; however, I could be mistaken. It's intriguing. Thank you so much for your visit to my POTD. It is much appreciated.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 7/28/2015 6:17:00 AM

You are right there are biblical themes included.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 7/28/2015 6:13:00 AM

Hi Eileen thanks for your insight.