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Came into being,
Achieved self-awareness;
Wondered if it was worth it.
My consciousness existed first!
Mark Halliday, 201405428

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/16/2014 3:39:00 PM
a different, unique tune for the theme, mark.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs
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Date: 6/14/2014 8:26:00 AM
For me one of the best!
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Date: 6/12/2014 11:51:00 AM
Beautiful write - no wonder you are a winner! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:17:00 AM
wow, this is REALLY a unique one on the list. congrats for your win. impressive!
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Date: 6/11/2014 11:13:00 PM
Mark, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/11/2014 3:35:00 PM
Oh, a completely different take on the contest! I like this very much, Mark !!
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Date: 6/11/2014 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Mark, on your win.
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Date: 6/11/2014 9:54:00 AM
Love where you took it Mark. Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/11/2014 6:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Mark.. I love the depth of thought with so few words.. Hugs.. Arlene..
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Mark! Interesting take on this theme! // paul
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Date: 5/28/2014 11:07:00 AM
Fabulous write Mark i hope this does well in the contest. Hugs Jan xxxx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/28/2014 12:30:00 PM
Thanks. I sort of just threw it together before my shift started.
Date: 5/28/2014 10:18:00 AM
Bravo, wonderful within its brevity, so much meaning in so few words! Best, Robert
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/28/2014 12:31:00 PM
Thanks. I sort of just threw it together before my shift started.

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