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I want to cry but tears wont come to my eyes I want to scream but no one hears me I have fought hard but with nothing coming from my trys I can't go on I want to break free I cant hold on anymore to love that is not returned I need to move on and find someone I have done been burned I know your love is gone

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2012 4:16:00 PM

Nita, a very sad feeling , having to face these empty feelings. I is the biggest feeling when it comes to emotions. I am I who no one sees me for who I am or who I long for. Am I all alone now that YOU are gone?? okay, enough is that... why is it that a YOU always comes after after the burnt feeling of an I... oh well..I'm not making sense... but I love this poem...deep...pd