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Hypnotized

I am lost in a moment that wraps the sky, one that touches the heavenly blue, and then lingers like a peaceful lullaby, a scene of majestic glory, just covering you. Where drifting clouds somehow leave my heart courageous, and brave enough to trace, these minutes that fall away, but never depart simply leading me softly to your marvelous embrace. Because I am always dancing with the moon up above, counting stars as they glisten, and sparkle in my eyes waiting for you, to caress my dreams of love with an immeasurable grace, that has my soul hypnotized. Featured Poem- 5/8/2022

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Date: 9/13/2023 1:51:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. I can picture you dancing with the moon, stars twinkling in your eyes
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/13/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. I enjoy being in the stars and the moon's soft glow, so, it's easy to see your vision. :)
Date: 5/11/2022 7:59:00 AM
Superb, am saving as a fave, Brandy! So happy PS decided to feature this poem, which I see was written in 2018
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/11/2022 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker, for placing this little scribble of mine in your favorites. I'm in awe that this poem has been featured. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/4/2021 5:01:00 AM
This is so enchanting and romantic Brandy, Beautiful write..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/4/2021 12:54:00 PM
Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 6/18/2018 7:59:00 AM
You have made me hypnotized with these beautiful word of yours, I am glad that I come across your page, all of your poems were unique and beautiful in their own way,
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/18/2018 11:54:00 AM
I am happy that you enjoyed this poem of mine. :) Thank you Faraz for all your kind words. ~ Maia
Date: 6/16/2018 9:10:00 AM
You are a beautiful hypnotic writer.Thank you for sharing your heart and soul with us.I find you quite inspiring
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/16/2018 12:50:00 PM
Thank you SYLVIA. My heart feels the inspiration that surrounds it. ~ Maia

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