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Hypnotic

Hiding green eyes with lace Her presence fills the room Hauntingly alluring, Hypnotizing the night Hearts blinded by deceit Held captive in charades. Let's Pleiades Contest: nette onclaud Written by Amelie Mara 4. 22. 2014

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Date: 5/6/2014 11:42:00 AM
Amelie, love it, love it... Enjoyed..Linda
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Date: 5/1/2014 8:40:00 PM
Very dreamy & evocative! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/1/2014 6:01:00 AM
Hypnotic write Amelie! a deserved win. love the alluring green eyes // paul
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Date: 5/1/2014 4:57:00 AM
a dark veneer of seduction finely woven, amelia... best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs
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