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The vampire leaves his crypt in search of blood.
A vegetarian before his death,
But now he’s cursed each night to take a life.

Recalling happy times throughout his life,
(Before another vampire drank his blood),
He wishes he had found eternal death.

He longs to lie beside his wife in death,
As they had lain together in his life -
Then spots a zombie, has to taste her blood…

Now hybrids, bloody deathly friends for life.

For Andrea’s Tritina contest

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your awesome win, Jack! Great writing as always! Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Wonderful and splendid piece,Jack..Great write...Wonderful presentation..Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Wow, this is such a unique spin on the contest! As always, you have spun an intriguing tale with your poem. You really nailed the form too. Big congrats! :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Made me shiver. congrats on your fine work being successful...again, BG

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:53:00 AM
    Congrats Jack, loved it....Seren

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:29:00 PM
    Hello Jack, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:26:00 PM
    Great win in Andrea’s contest Jack, creative take!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 10:11:00 AM took this contest to a different cleverly and well done!! Congratulations, Jack!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Oh you and vampires, scary my friend ,congratulations on your winning spot Jack xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Jack spooky. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Love this scarry write jack!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 1:54:00 AM
    Jack, congrats on your win, ghoulishly good....David

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:48:00 PM
    Jack, this was super clever. I had a feeling it might be yours because I know how much you love vampire stuff, but for the unique spin you put on it, that's why I rated it so high. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:15:00 PM
    hahahahaha a very awesome make me laugh. like it friend Jack. Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Contest. Cheers!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Got a chuckle out this one..It probably should not have been funny though..Reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Jack, are you inventing a new race? I like it and good luck...David

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:56:00 PM
    Clever "Tritina", Jack! The last line says it all! Best wishes for the contest! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Ha ha, isn't this quite the story my friend! I just loved reading this illustrious write this afternoon! What a powerfully written piece, such a special writing, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Uhhhh nice but eerrrieeee must confess vampires weird me out! Good luck....