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Hutain This One

HUTAIN THIS ONE... Dancing mystic lights burn through me Blur my vision and my mood Watch the night becoming lively Can you see how I’m confused? My energy has raised the roof These lights are dancing like lightning Twist and swirl round me when I'm move Force of nature - so exciting! By Emma Buckeridge 28th July 2011

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Lee Ramage

Date: 8/4/2011 8:53:00 PM

Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:39:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Emma

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2011 11:47:00 AM

Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2011 12:03:00 AM

Emma, this is so nice. I love how you decided to interpret those lights! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 5:48:00 PM

Congrats Emma on an exciting win in Hutain poetry contest with these awesome lines luv..kudos...

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/3/2011 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2011 3:50:00 PM

Wonderful creative writing today Emma. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol