Hurt

~EmoSuicideSilencex~ HURT I lay on the floor in a dark corner Dying and Crying in my Pain My heart is cold I feel nothing, but pain and Agony I'm falling Into the shadows with no one To help me I’m so Alone…. No one to love No one to love me I’m sad and people just try to make me feel bad…… I cut away my Pain…………..

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2014 5:24:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Winter- I choose your first very well written... but so sad poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/25/2014 7:57:00 PM

I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita