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Below is the poem entitled Hurt which was written by poet Caleah Buil. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I feel
You'd "Never hurt me"
You swore
I didn't think
I'd feel this way
Even now
I think of words to say
To describe
This odd pain
I'd liked you
That much is true
But it stopped there
So its not fair
For me to feel like this
So mixed

You moved on faster than I thought
It hurts to know how soon you gave up
I pretend
And say, "Let's be friends."
But was it all a lie?
The feelings you conjured up inside
For me?
The distant way you brush me aside
As cool as ice
I meant nothing to you
Did I?
It's just the same
I'm like a pawn in a chess game
You'd never hurt me
You're too blind to see
That you did
"I'd never hurt you."
It's a line that's been reused
And I was a fool
For falling for that one too
Don't say it,
"I'd never hurt you."
It's cruel
Because in the end
You always do

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  1. Date: 5/12/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Caleah, love is blind, I adore the deep emotions in this poem. I marked my x-es words when he told me he was never gonna hurt me.. but at the end that's all I got.. hurt hurt & hurt... a very powerful poem my newest favorite poet. Thank you for the lovely comments. I try very hard to post poems poets might like... always~ LINDA

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/13/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh I know, (not to be a guy hater cause I'm not) but most guys can be such jerks. Sadly I have experienced this firsthand way too many times. I am so sorry that you had to as well. It always hurts when the person you care for doesn't mean what they say... Thank you so much!!! That means so much to me! U have wonderful poetry as well! Keep on writing!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 5:49:00 PM
    very heartfelt write here.keep up the great work.take care.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/12/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much! :D
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:41:00 PM
    pretty nice and you are right im a lover with a strong heart thank you.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:37:00 PM
    loved yur poem :))))

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 3/29/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much for commenting! :D
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 10:31:00 AM
    with beautiful poetry like this,, you will not be hurting too long this poem..

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 2/17/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww! Thank you so much! That really means a lot. :)
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:37:00 AM
    The day you meet the "right", then you will understand that he is your "prince" - Touching written Caleah. - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much! Really encouraging words. I do believe that one day I will. :) Have a wonderful day as well!
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Yes, some people just can't even see what they are doing. they are blind to it. Actions speak louder than words. That is one proverb I strongly believe in and your poem says that words mean very little as well!