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Hurt

When I look into your eyes It’s like I am alive When I touch your hands It’s like the world ends When I feel you breathing near me You can hear my heart skip a beat We had fun and all the special moments And then it stopped I stopped You hurted me with your lies And all your fake smiles But most off all You hurted me with Every touch you gave I will never forget the good But will always have the bad You ruined me, but at the same time You made me, me So I thank you for that And the fact that, thanks to you I am me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/21/2016 10:30:00 PM
Zetcke great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:33:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2008 11:46:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup, this is a good write of expression, you will find a love that will love you for you. God healed my hurt twice round, but now I have the most beautiful husband in the world,, god bless you from diane and welcome to soup.
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Date: 11/12/2008 10:25:00 AM
Keep up the great work. This work is awesome. The best way to express yourself is through poetry. Just remember although they have broken your heart, you will always learn from the hurt.
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Date: 11/7/2008 11:07:00 AM
You have talent my friend....I say when it comes to writing down emotions you must only be true... and so you are!
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Date: 11/5/2008 1:08:00 PM
A reason for everything, the good with the bad. One of life's learning experience helping create the person you are. Wonderful poetry. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/5/2008 5:19:00 AM
So true most of us are made by what others do to define us is to see the one that is hidden under what others have done, keep on writing on.
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