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Hurricane Eileen - the Storm

A dedication to Eileen Ghali for her prolific production of inspiring work Willow Tree = Keyboard And that’s your only clue Hurricane Eileen - The Storm As darkness drew nearer Light falling to drearer I knew, the night was a foul The windows were slashed By her white lightening blast Down the chimney old windy did howl By her orchestrates He rattles the grates Appears round each gap in the door Then in comes her rain Through cracked window pain As I witness her latest downpour How the storm fascinates With the show she creates And I sit here and watch her for free Down on the plain Taking the strain She batters the gnarled willow tree Great thunder clouds form In the head of the storm And magic arrives in her sky Come rivers of rain With nowhere to drain The water, a flood, rises high Then happens a lull To recharge to the full Takes time out to contemplate To be cruel or be kind She rampages her mind And comes back, at double the rate With a boom and a crack Bursts silver from black A crescendo of noise fills the ear And the gnarled willow tree Writhes in ecstasy By the pulse of her wild atmosphere Mixed shadows are cast By her white lightening blast Her soul, for a while, exposed For a moment in time All is in rhyme Till her story she chooses to close As her elements soar They’re at large with a roar For hours they’ll dance and they’ll play Blows the hurricane Driving her reign Till had, fulfilment of stay With her forces unleashed Her passions released The storm passes over to light Once more she has shown By the tantrum she’s sown Her strength… her power… her MIGHT.

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Date: 7/30/2015 8:13:00 AM
You can never top this masterpiece.
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:38:00 PM
Even with all the rhymes, I still like this one because of who it's about. You are on point! You were feeling this one!
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Date: 7/14/2015 8:33:00 AM
I love it Richard, impressive work and a wonderful dedication to our friend. Also congratulations on becoming a lifetime member Richard.
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:39:00 AM
I agree with Jan it is an awesome poem and a fitting tribute to an awesome poet, "the desert rose" love shane xxx
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Date: 2/1/2015 5:34:00 AM
A wonderful dedication to Eileen:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:04:00 AM
I needed a boost this afternoon, so, I came back for another read....I do believe this is your best work, and not because it is about me, but the lines and SO SO smooth flowing and beautiful....It's done well in the views. Whatever the case may be...I rate it at NUMBER ONE! Hugs
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Date: 7/22/2013 7:56:00 PM
An awesome tribute to one of my fave poetesses on Soup. I would also liken Eileen to a hurricane. Good work, Richard. Licia :-)
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:25:00 PM
This is beautiful. I agree with you. She is really good. She will enjoy this very much. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Date: 6/20/2013 10:05:00 PM
Came back to this one that Eileen is crazy about And who can blame her? You did her proud!!! (I have looked and looked and can not find a poem of yours I have not already seen) Get up a new one!!!
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Date: 6/12/2013 11:44:00 PM
Hi, Richard. Came back to this awesome piece of work! Auntie LOVES this! I really do! Hope you are having a good night! You're in dream land right now! Soup mail when you wake up...I know you are morning person, as I am! Take care...
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Date: 6/16/2013 8:32:00 AM
Late reply but thank you. Yes at morning.
Date: 5/26/2013 2:06:00 AM
Awesome write Richard,, going to faves. Thank you for reading my Soul Sucker ;} You have a great day ;}
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Date: 6/16/2013 8:29:00 AM
You are welcome Debie. I enjoyed it very much
Date: 5/5/2013 7:38:00 PM
Richard; This is a great dedication to Eileen. That girl is relly good. she never fails to surprise me. You are one writter. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 5/6/2013 5:23:00 AM
Lucilla you is a hun, and yes she is good and does suprise, thank you for your lovely comment
Date: 5/5/2013 9:02:00 AM
Richard, I just wanted to thank you again for this. Honestly, it means so much to me. Yesterday, my brother and family were over, and I read it to my 18 year old niece who also loves writing. She was so impressed with your writing and with the fact that it was about me! Made me stand tall. Can't describe the feeling, just....wanted to thank you again. Hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/5/2013 1:03:00 PM
Nice to read this right now. I'm discouraged and tired....but this comment lifts my spirit. Its time for the downpour of rain, but I'll try to be strong. Thank you.
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Date: 5/5/2013 12:02:00 PM
You know you're more than welcome Eileen. You earnt this and was a pleasure for me to write. I have a copy in my paper file and you can be sure it will be read and I will think of you in the years to come.
Date: 5/3/2013 7:16:00 PM
and thanks for what you said here too in your reply to my comment!!
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Date: 5/5/2013 12:04:00 PM
You're welcome
Date: 5/1/2013 5:46:00 PM
Wooof!!! That is a superb tribute to Queen Eileen!! I should have read this before written mine!! Richard, you have a powerful ability of using words and drawing images!! A superb write!!!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 5/1/2013 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Guru, Queen Eileen deserves the recognition, she's one sassy and clever lady. I must say I envy you being able to talk shop face to face with her. Hope the pair of you have many happy meets.
Date: 5/1/2013 1:33:00 PM
Hi Richard. :) Just to let you know...I read it! You know just what would appeal to me. I commented back on what you posted on my latest poem. Go there if you want more details. Hope you are doing ok! :) Right now...we're in the eye of the storm...everything is calm...for now!
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:43:00 PM
I'm pleased to hear all is calm, we all need a break sometimes, a welcome harbour to recharge our batteries. I have read your comment as left, knew you would enjoy that, has always been one of my faves.
Date: 4/29/2013 7:03:00 PM
Hey Richard. I just wanted to say thanks for all the support you've given me... it means a lot! I hope I don't come off as being a person who is "dead serious" all the time... if you want to find my goofier side you can check out Attempting One-Liners and/or my clerihews. I will be sharing some more lighthearted stuff tomorrow... thanks again for your kind and honest comments!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 9:53:00 AM
Your comments are light hearted Tim and always interesting. I enjoy our exchanges. Honesty is the best policy along with understanding.
Date: 4/29/2013 11:54:00 AM
Richard, a poet on fire here. Astounding imagery and depth. Magnificent
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:48:00 AM
Fingers still in bandages lol. I think Eileen's must be water cooled as she types lol. Thanks for the lovely comment Karen
Date: 4/28/2013 9:40:00 PM
Nicely said about my lil spitfire darling angel...one of a kind and I love her.. great write...Richard...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/30/2013 10:29:00 PM
Richard! Really? You have to mull???? Well, maybe mis Spitfire will pay you a visit....and SOON! ;(
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Donna, I second Spitfire, I'm still mulling on the angel though. lol
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/30/2013 2:06:00 AM
How I love you, MD! I will cherish the words you used to describe me! Hugs! :)
Date: 4/28/2013 9:02:00 PM
wow GREAT work. You were incredibly inspired and I enjoyed the imagery!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 10:02:00 AM
As they say Petal, You will find inspiring people in the soup, You would be suprised how you have inspired me. Thank you for the comment and your encouragement.
Date: 4/28/2013 7:34:00 PM
wow Richard, you picked a fine poet filled with inspiration... I love The Poet Of Eileen, for she has made me smile many times... and her avatar is like a ray of the sun... Her Might... Her Power,,, can give some one like me STRENGTH... always a fan~ LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/28/2013 8:23:00 PM
May I say something???? LINDAAAAAAA! You are so so sweet! WOW! I'm touched to my very core! Bless you for saying that. Richard is a bit tease. Bear with him! ;) After all...I can't be too mean after he's gone and done this masterpiece, but you let him have it, you hear? Hugs!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/28/2013 7:46:00 PM
You might be less of a fan after you see yours hahahahahaha
Date: 4/28/2013 3:02:00 PM
A very unique work..Descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for your visit..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/28/2013 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Sara, always a pleasure to hear from you
Date: 4/28/2013 9:52:00 AM
This is so fitting for lovable Eileen. Thunder storms are both frightening and beautiful... they can cause a lot of damage if they happen too close, but if you're just far enough to watch the show... it's out of this world.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2013 1:34:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. :) Very sweet of you. Richard, most men are.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/28/2013 7:49:00 PM
I'm a storm watcher
Date: 4/28/2013 8:04:00 AM
- Nature's power - very fascinating to watch on TV .... but, I have great respect and fear the strong forces. - A very well written poem Richard. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/28/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, though I prefer to feel the force, thanks for the comment
Date: 4/28/2013 7:25:00 AM
soup mail, Richard.
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