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Hurricane

H ail storms of turmoil shook me to the core U nderstanding that look as she walked through the door R avaging my heart with her blatant lies R ipping me apart with deception in her eyes I nfidelity has inspired this acrostic poetry C arrying me away with her hellish whirlwind A nd so devilish is her grin, trying to cause my end N aturally, I do what I can to shelter my heart E ventually this woman will literally rip me apart

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Date: 5/28/2010 10:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Jimmy. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:17:00 AM
anybody reading this can definitely feel that hurricane raging with those words, Jimmy! You sure do well in making your words leap from the page, nice one...hopefully the hurricane has passed...
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:57:00 PM
WOW Jimmy I luv this one... your words rip the page with emotion... enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 6:18:00 PM
Sometimes we eat the bear and sometimes the bear eats us! .....Light & Love
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