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Hunter's Bullet Fired

hunter's bullet fired turtledove falls swiftly down... white aura floats up poet collapses upon kitchen floor silence... white garment caress white light very bright draws dove poetess to come... white light tunnel's end Who knows what it is...

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2012 4:11:00 PM

interesting these are, love the second one best, although all good.....

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/7/2012 3:33:00 PM

Quite an adventuress write Sara; good feeling here in Its trusting portrayl of life, spirit,and eternity's reality.." In existence.. Well donr Sara. yours Joe..)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:54:00 PM

beautiful write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2012 8:03:00 AM

intrigued by this, sara... sounds spiirtually laden to me...cryptic yet beautifully expressed.. huggs!..:)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2012 12:42:00 AM

What a great idea to use" white" in this way..enjoyed this so much. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2012 11:35:00 PM

an interesting story, sara. What inspired this?

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/6/2012 9:49:00 PM

I saw you were one shy of reaching 2200 poems. I was waiting for this one. This is a nice way to describe how existence in the hereafter might appear.

Timothy Jacks

Date: 10/6/2012 7:15:00 PM

This is very tricky to an unsuspecting mind....

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2012 5:20:00 PM

a well woven delight...enjoyed...hugs....is this for the contest...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/6/2012 5:04:00 PM

Sara; This is fantastic. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2012 4:00:00 PM

I know what it is Sara, it's beautiful! I really enjoyed this fascinating write that you have so illustriously written! Such a gorgeous poem, vastly incredible my friend! What a delightful write about a wondrous white light! Terrific piece, Great Work!!