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Hungry Critter

While camping up high in the trees I woke up one “mourning” to pee Thought that I heard a “bare” But it was only a “hair” Who was eating my breakfast with tea. Written on 3/21/2016

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/29/2016 7:08:00 AM

bare>hair> pee, well, let's have peas in the breakfast with cheese please. Love.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 12:12:00 PM

Thanks, Rajat! Glad you liked this :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:12:00 AM

Yet another lovely win Laura.. big congrats!

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2016 7:33:00 PM

this is a hilarious write, Laura, congratulations on your win :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you, Eve :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2016 3:20:00 PM

Laura, great write! Congratulations on your win in the Wordplay Extravaganza contest! Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2016 1:55:00 PM

Many congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thanks, Jan :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/21/2016 6:00:00 PM

G'day Laura ... nice play with words - Lindsay

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2016 7:07:00 PM

Thanks, Lindsay, glad you liked it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/21/2016 5:16:00 PM

very funny Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2016 7:07:00 PM

Thank, Jan :)