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Hungry

Batting away the hold on me to rebuke all kindness to expel in blindness the vomit that is dread. I fear too many things on an empty stomach, so I inhale the final drops of my woeful sustenance— where are you, Little Hope?

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Date: 1/26/2021 5:54:00 AM
I like the pattern perhaps like saying food for thought yes hope at times all we have left xx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/27/2021 11:58:00 AM
Very perceptive, David. I like how you analyze poetry! ~Laura
Date: 1/15/2021 4:41:00 PM
Be careful what you wish for Poetess...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/15/2021 4:58:00 PM
Too true, Justin <3 ~Laura

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