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Hunger Zone

For years I have fought And battled with weight Now disabled and in pain I fear it's too late I can't eat this I can't eat that Diets are fads They make me fat I've tried the patches They've taken my money No magical cure for My big fat tummy I wasn't always as big You should know It was having a baby That made me grow so I can't stick to the books For so much I don't like If I have to eat muck They can go take a hike I've tried the tablets But for me they don't suit Not eating sufficient The problems the root Try three meals a day Instead of just one A plate that's for sandwiches For lunch to put on I'm trying to lose Of second week I am now I'm not using scales Or measuring how I'm combining it all From the net I can find A menu that suits That does not blow the mind It's working quite well At the moment I know For in smaller trousers My belly will go I can fasten my blouse And the buttons don't gape My cleavage is shrinking There's ample to take If I continue to lose At this sensible rate My clothes will not fit And I'll drop all the weight But as third week approaches I begin to have doubts The weight tends to stable And I tend to drop out I need to stand firm In resolve and give time For my body to shape And bring back its waist-line A little encouragement Goes a long way And the poetry keeps The snacking at bay So if I seem busy With armfuls of writes Forgive me for starving off Hungers of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2013 3:26:00 PM
hmmm, so you wrote this four years ago. how did it all go??? your diet? this is a great topic that interests me. FOr years I have struggled too. I am now at size 12 but 14 years ago I was feeling amazing at size 10 and it kills me that I can't keep the weight off. sometimes I can't even fit into 12's, especially on top, I have to wear extra large. I sure hope you were able to be a reasonable weight. it's hard enough being reasonable let alone a skinny minny!!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 8/13/2013 2:04:00 AM
Thankyou Andrea, but I'm sure with your womenly shape your size is quite fine! Sadly my own went no further, I do keep giving it another stab but still no juoy - of course I can't excercise as such and meds don't help so without greed and glutony and with sense in hand we must get on with life and smile above it all in hope something might change.... Will keep giving it a go but where it will end who knows? Still there are worse things in life we could be worried over... The experts are right though it is excercise that is key but it needs be the right mix which is not so easy for all...
Date: 4/28/2009 12:58:00 PM
What a lovely poem Anna Marie :-) James,x
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Date: 4/8/2009 12:28:00 AM
Anna-Marie, my sister and I have dieting contests. "Hungers of Life" is a very good way to describe what is truly happening to us. There is a book called "Feeding the Hungry Heart." It gets to the root of what causes people to overeat. They are usually facing other obstacles like grief, shame, fear, etc. I "live" on a perpetual diet because losing weight is one thing, keeping it off is another. I really like your poem. It's heartfelt and contains much truth. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:42:00 AM
Smile~I love this write Anna Marie!:) filled with honesty~humor~sensibility~which are all markings of integrity!:) Smile~I truly admire these qualities among other things within writers!:) For instance, your poem flowed well and told us a tale!:) Smile~And, you keep writing dear lady~for I have a good feeling about "You!":) Upon both ends of the spectrum!:)~Again, "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Your Loves,' Always, John!:) Smile, Bye Again!:)
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