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Hunger Knows Caution

The forest was so still and my heart calm. The frogs in the pond croak welcoming in the morning air. A fog sweet, wet, hazy-grey blankets us cloaking my spotted hide, muting the mornings’ echo. Though mother has left, she, dearest Hunger has not. Deep in my entrails, the two-legged hunters so desire; she, Hunger stirs, twisting a preemptive knife of warning. Only small buds rise on my head where antlers will be by fall. Death waits breathless on the breeze. Hunger, dearest Hunger knows Death. Father was lost to Death on a bright fall morn. My ears turn, a branch crumbles beneath the weight of ... Hunger knows Caution and tosses her head within my tender hide. My fur rises at her discomfort. She is not satisfied. Yet, I would flee, holding her close to my heart. I leap away from the clearing over a fallen log shaped like a bobcats tail curling. The forest of conifers is dense and deep. The weak morning sun does not enter and Hunger approves of the privacy. Sometimes, I wonder, as I eat the sweet stalks of wild onions without mother or father; would I be here in this majesty, without my dearest, without Hunger. Would the hunter hunt me without his Hunger?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/15/2009 7:31:00 PM
Hi, Deborah! First of all I would like to thank you for your heartfelt and inspiring comments. Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest! I love the theme and the flow of words. Forests are my favorite places of refuge...there alone in the wild! Best wishes for more wins and continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 6/14/2009 4:28:00 PM
Deborah, This was a wonderful way to handle this challenging write. Congratulations on placing in this contest. Excellent. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest. This is a beautiful, outstanding write, Deborah!
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Date: 6/11/2009 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, a wonderful poem
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:42:00 PM
YAY on your absolutely awesome win in Matt's contest! Way to go Debbie gal! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:15:00 PM
Great win, Deborah. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2009 2:50:00 AM
Cingratulations on your 3rd place win-AA
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:25:00 AM
This flow of this piece is excellent. I like your use of images to bring the essence of the poem to the forefront. That's a wonderful strategy. The theme is also consistent with the title and the narration. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/16/2009 3:49:00 PM
Hunger knows caution-i love the title and the defined description and i love the last verse,makes me think about hunting for survival--wonderful and good luck my friend for the contest,regarding your comment,you saw deep in my poem Rich Oyster,as deep as a friend would see;-)---and you are one of my pearls in shells too,the Rich Oyster is something else then;-)you seem to have a sixth sense my sweet friend---charma
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Date: 5/16/2009 3:01:00 PM
hi deborah to answer ur question tongues is a langauge given by God so we can talk to him when we run out of english
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Date: 5/16/2009 2:03:00 PM
Awesome! I had a similar idea and thank goodness I did not use it as it never would compare! Nice work! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/16/2009 8:52:00 AM
Deborah, now the cave-man looks in the mirror.....well done!! Jim and thanks for your great comments!! Jim
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Date: 5/16/2009 7:00:00 AM
A provocative question in your last line....A great poem, Deborah....superb writing once again! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/16/2009 6:33:00 AM
Such a lovely piece! a metaphor with so much to give Deborah, like it a lot! Thanks for your comment.
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Date: 5/16/2009 5:41:00 AM
Nice write... I loved the story in this... Jack..
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