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Our little family was together .......for now Daddy was asleep on the couch and I was here sharing your bed in your little student flat tomorrow our togetherness would unravel We'd be forced to travel leaving you behind in this enchanting Hungarian city to make your dream come true you'd be a physiotherapy guru one day As I struggled with the heaviness in my heart, a heaviness I knew you would come to know when the fullness of motherhood you'd show, you turned to me and gurgled a laugh the unfettered kind that only comes in dreamland I gazed at your face in wonder then it came to me again another girlish giggle and just as quickly...it was gone for your dream carried you and I was left holding on desperately wanting this moment to last I let out a sigh Looking out of your window up at the Hungarian sky my eyes focused on a star as my heart breathed a wish that your laugh would come as readily in your wakeful hours as it did in your dream that you'd always be cognizant how blessed you are My life, my star I closed my eyes as I felt the burden slowly shift from my heart though separation would come in the morning nothing could steal the memory of that sound that magical dulcet chime of my daughter in her prime blooming with love for her true mother... LIFE! Yes, my sleeping angel though goodbyes will be said I know that everything... Yes, everything will be alright for I heard you laugh in your dreams tonight Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 9/6/2017 9:47:00 AM
What a beautiful intimate piece!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2017 2:30:00 AM
Thank you, dear. Shereen is vital to my existence. Hugs
Date: 9/3/2017 6:18:00 AM
Mother-daughter loving bond...Beautiful and full of emotion, Eileen. It is so hard to go, leaving her behind, even though you know that it's only temporary. That laugh is such a lovely memory! Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:07:00 PM
Yes, dear...it surely is. Thank you for your visit, dear. I've been so busy lately with my father's visit and the new academic year, I haven't had much time for PS. I'm also teaching a new course...Intro to Rhetoric. Takes lots of prep work. I'll be by to visit you soon. Hugs, dear one.
Date: 9/2/2017 4:11:00 AM
well penned...it really made my day dear. Bug kudos to you for this awesome work of yours and your pretty daughter
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Ifeanyi. I appreciate your visit and kind words. I miss her so much that at times it is more than I can bear.
Date: 9/1/2017 8:05:00 PM
Your daughter is so beautiful, Eileen, wishing our children's future become their fairytales .. love your poem. Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:21:00 PM
What a sweet post, Eve. I wish so too. Nothing would bring me more joy than to know my daughter is happy and well. Blessings.
Date: 8/30/2017 12:00:00 PM
Oh this is so beautiful and sweet, I really loved how you ended the poem "for I heard you laugh in your dreams tonight" Hugs!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur. It was a truly magical moment for me. :)
Date: 8/30/2017 5:43:00 AM
Wow! Perfectly written for a most loved daughter from a loving mom, Eileen, wonderful!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:24:00 PM
I am blessed with Shereen. I get jealous sometimes when I see how close she is to her father...that's just me. She comes to me with the relationship issues, so I'm just needed! ;) Hugs and thanks
Date: 8/30/2017 2:31:00 AM
What a perfect picture of motherly love Eileen in your heartfelt poem. It's hard to say goodbye after you have spent precious time with your daughter but you have wonderful memories and I'm sure she misses you as much as you do her. Now its her time to fly and she is following her dream and will make you so so proud when she graduates:-) She is a stunning as her mum!:-) hugs jan x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/5/2017 2:26:00 PM
You are so kind, Jan. Thank you for this lovely compliment. Yes...I try to remember that when the ache gets too much. I can't keep her in the nest forever, but I hope that she will be protected wherever she goes by angels. Hugs, dear.

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