Hung

Sweating he hung a swing between two live oaks Striking he hung a chain between two black hooks Swinging he hung his hands between two strong roots

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 7:19:00 PM

WOW, that's deep...SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/28/2014 12:55:00 PM

love the semi-abstarct feel of this, john... original!.. huggs

Leigh Nickolyn

Date: 5/5/2011 6:49:00 PM

This is so... I can't even find a word to describe it. Im usually not one for this type of poetry, but you definitely changed my mind on that. This is great! -Leigh Anne

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/3/2011 4:14:00 AM

Hi John good poem , will be back to read more. Anne

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 4:11:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you John. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol