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Humor is my inspiration

At awe by my mothers beautiful mind,
when it came to writing I always felt so blind.

Literature class advised us to write,
for the first time I did not feel bright.

Sneak a poem of my mothers i did,
boy did I feel like a little kid.

Praise my teacher gave me for such a lovely write,
my mind here and there like a kite.

Lucky me open house was here,
the poem posted on the class wall had me at fear.

Suggesting my parents to skip that class,
trying to avoid the coming sass.

She read it and thought to herself that it was idolized,
her eyes got big as she realized.

Quiet she kept as she knew how embarrassed I was,
of course it gave her a buzz.

It was cause of that day we look back,
and my mom gave me some slack.

She later taught me it's as simple as rhyming,
and with the emotions I have priming.

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
    This is a very nice write, I like it. But if I may, please allow me to be honest about a thought on this. I feel like you should end this poem, it seems incomplete. I was waiting for an ending. However, on the other hand. Poetry is an art, and a very personal one at that. In no way am I trying to discredit your creation and if it is complete in your heart and artistic vew, then in no way am I trying to controvert that. Respectfully ~ Chris

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Lovely Royal, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 7:54:00 PM
    Excellent write I see the joy in you mum when her work was admired and what a great mum not to say a thing,, mum's just know alli am glad you continued to write with dear mum's guidance as this is a great poem so enjoyed the read,, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 9:54:00 AM
    fantastic write.Hope you and your mom had a great Mother's Day.take care

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Royal. don't forget how much I loved your poem A Simple visit. I have a contest going on!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 12:48:00 AM
    Dear Royal, I'm quite glad YOU used YOUR Mothers POEM.If YOU want to be the Best, YOU have to WORK with the Best. This is a Superb (covert) Tribute to YOUR MOTHER. Welcome to the World of POETRYSOUP. I would also say Welcome to the Family but YOU already are FAMILY.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER with YOU ...Harry

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Just found this poem, made me smile, thinking crafty b. lol but can imagine PD,s face when she realised. Welcome to Soup ....Seren

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Your first but already so great and fantastic one/couplet my dearest Royal. I love it and I was so delighted to read it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and I also want to give you my warmest welcome to the soup ( our 2nd home) my dear Royal, the very dear daughter of my loving poet sis and only greatest poet here. Have a blessed Easter Season! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Cute story. I remember how ridiculous my first attempt at writing a poem was. This makes me wish I had some funny and/or interesting story from childhood to write about. Welcome to the Soup! I'm quite new here myself, but I'll be looking out for your name!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 2:24:00 PM
    An enjoyable poem Royal, which I really like. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Good luck! - Have a lovely weekend. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:15:00 AM
    Excellent write. Well penned. Enjoyed

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Thank you Royal, i suppose I'm that mother... LOL~ and what a day that was... viewing my poem as your own, to impress your teacher... he he he... I still don't know what you were thinking, but to see my poem on the wall, as your own... now makes me chuckle... that tiny cute memory... glad to see you taking up the soup again... an excellent poem and entry... me & you...PD

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:40:00 PM
    This poem gave me a warm feeling inside..really enjoyed it!! And Welcome to Poetry Soup!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT