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Hummming a Tune - Lyric Contest

Snuggled cosily in a blanket of love Eyes tightly shut, listening to above Where the robin chirps his merry song Guarding his garden from the throng I hummm a merry tune Strings of violins pass through my mind Mournfully and sad .....as if to remind me of days of yore when love was great How did that feeling turn to hate I hummm a soulful tune Sun is setting here to shine elsewhere Reminds me of how I still care for life, for love ...it's music fills my soul I close my eyes to slumber, to recall, hummming a sleepy tune
Penned 12/03/18 Contest : Lullaby in the sunset run by Vermilion Scythe

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Date: 6/30/2018 8:53:00 AM
Back to read you again.. it's all I have. You're writing on a completely different level these days.. you are in all of your writes. I feel you there.
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Date: 5/13/2018 10:04:00 PM
Seren, a fresh love can change your tune. There's one who cares more than you could know.. when the lyric is complete he'll sing to you!
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Date: 4/3/2018 5:21:00 AM
a lovely lullaby Seren, i find the second stanza so sad though:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2018 12:56:00 AM
Excellent. Well done. Thanks for sharing it.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/12/2018 2:59:00 PM
Hi Ravi so nice to see you. thank you so much for liking it....Seren
Date: 3/11/2018 1:33:00 PM
nicely done, Seren, luck in the contest :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/11/2018 5:10:00 PM
Hi Eve thank you for stopping by...Seren
Date: 3/11/2018 12:27:00 PM
Simply gorgeous poetry Seren. One of your best. A fav
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/11/2018 5:10:00 PM
thanks Tim glad you liked it..Seren
Date: 3/11/2018 3:29:00 AM
I had to read this three times, because of the subtlety of the message. Well done! And how does love turn to hate? I have always wondered, but it seems to so many many times.
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Date: 3/11/2018 6:40:00 AM
hello Caren thank you so much for commenting. to answer your question I don't know. Maybe hate is a too heavy word. but it rhymed.lol .. Seren

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