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Hummingbirds

bright ruby and green flash dance across the garden. humming and twirling sipping from flowers they zigzag helter-skelter savoring each drop chirping their pleasure as they drink nature’s treasure suddenly they’re gone

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Date: 2/19/2024 7:50:00 PM
Dear Jerry, you capture the enchanting energy and essence of hummingbirds with wonderful enticing imagery. I adore their “flash dance” and your string of Haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/22/2024 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate you drooping in and leaving such kind words.
Date: 2/19/2024 7:50:00 PM
Beautiful…love the flash dance!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/22/2024 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Kim

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