Hummingbird

hummingbird's green array seen in willow tree... no, three leaves windblow I am seeing things this morn!!Ha!!

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K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 5/22/2013 3:16:00 PM

there are few who churn out Haiku the way you do!

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/30/2013 11:13:00 PM

Vary nice Sara! I love how you bring nature to life .

Kash Poet

Date: 4/27/2013 12:08:00 PM

Beautiful haiku here Sara!Lovely read.

Watisungla Ao

Date: 4/27/2013 5:38:00 AM

Some moments are so capturing (hardly matters their real presence) that when you pen it down,it just become more beautifull to recollect those moments.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/26/2013 9:20:00 PM

Nice poem and the morning is the best way to see beautiful things. Good night and God bless you..... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2013 5:51:00 PM

oh my, how creative this is!!! and I wish you were right about working at the gym. but I would have to double my trips to even lose a pound. haha

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/26/2013 3:45:00 PM

Ha ha, oh I too have days in which I see illusions so don't feel bad Sara! Did you notice my "On the Porch" poem? I wrote that by your inspiring me to do so! I believe it turned out pretty good if you ask me! I hope that you enjoy it! This poem is wonderful my friend! I enjoyed reading it today, Awesome Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/26/2013 12:16:00 PM

because you enchant me in all ways, sara... wonderful 'ku!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2013 9:44:00 AM

Hummingbirds I've never seen those in Norway ..... but they are beautiful. - Wishing you a lovely weekend Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)