Humility

Humbled by unanswered prayers Understanding I am in God’s care Melting within from my sin Inspired by fire to do a cleanse Lacking the power to cleanse alone Indigo spiritual carry me to the throne Timing of trinity’s truth well known Yes I repent and want to go home

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/21/2024 5:59:00 PM

Dear Karen, your beautiful Acrostic captures the essence of "humility" with poetic finesse. Inspiring truth. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Karen Jones
Date: 2/21/2024 6:05:00 PM

Your words are kind Susan. Thank you

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2024 8:56:00 AM

That is truly what humility is. God forgives.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/20/2024 12:21:00 PM

Amen thanks for your comment Victor

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2024 11:33:00 AM

Dear Karen, your poem on humility is truly profound. The way you expressed it through the acrostic form is commendable, as it is no easy feat. Wishing you a delightful afternoon.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/19/2024 12:41:00 PM

I appreciate you reading Sotto Poet and leaving such a positive comment. Thanks and have a blessed eve!