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Humans and Tails

PEOPLE AND TAILS -‘-‘’’’’-‘---------‘-‘-‘’-‘ at the park’s big zoo cute chimps and apes jump and scream like humans …striving through them I see me surviving by first instinct but I have no tail ??? © copyright _________________ Contest: John Freeman’s Natural and Beyond

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 9:20:00 AM

Stopping by your amazing poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Nette. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2011 9:52:00 PM

Nette, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy third place win. I have been so busy renovating my old home, I just haven't had time to do much commenting. Sorry. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 8/29/2011 9:59:00 PM

Hi Nette,Congrats on your win...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2011 6:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2011 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, nette

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/29/2011 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on your third place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2011 3:05:00 PM

Had a nice chuckle reading your entry, Nette. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2011 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/28/2011 11:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 11:33:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on a fantastico win with this poignant piece with wit and definition luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/28/2011 10:03:00 PM

congrats, nette, hugs, jag

John Freeman

Date: 8/28/2011 9:43:00 PM

So you've lost your tail... good for you. You're on your way now for sure. I still have mine, so I guess I'm still evolving. Smile. Congrats"chuckle" on your worthy third place entry. Agape, Moses

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/28/2011 8:49:00 PM

hah.. can't BE!! cute cute .. wtg nette! ~N

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2011 12:39:00 AM

last time I looked me neither Nette luv... how clever u coordinated this write..good luck in the contest.. miss u much luv..

Constance La France

Date: 8/26/2011 3:52:00 PM

Wonderful nette, this will do very well in John's contest, I am sure and thanks so much for your ever supports of me and my prose~~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2011 2:03:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Nette. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2011 1:52:00 PM

keen observation, nette

Nick Bagnall

Date: 8/26/2011 7:45:00 AM

I really like this one, interesting observation.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/26/2011 6:33:00 AM

hi Nette,I am here......Very nice interpretation of the contest photo....A great entry to the contest.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/26/2011 12:27:00 AM

Great job here Nette. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2011 12:17:00 AM

I am with Russell, you are an enjoyment and I myself am glad we have no tails..Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night~ LINDA

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2011 12:06:00 AM

Great work! I really enjoyed this Nette! I'm glad we have no tail personally! Good luck in the contest...should be a winner!!