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Human Folly

Carl is handsome Beth says come dear Awesome affair Beth’s spouse comes close Breaks Carl’s nose bone Fierce blows rain soon Quick comes Carl’s wife Like sharp knife edge Life rife with pulls _____________________ 20 February 2016 Than-Bauk on Human Folly – Poetry Contest by Marugu Mo Syllables 36 Checked on: www.howmanysyllables.com

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2016 12:51:00 PM

Very witty, Probir. Nice twist on human folly. You inspired me to write a than-bauk poem. I liked this one very much though. Keep up the good writing. Love you always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 1:04:00 AM

Thank you ...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:52:00 PM

Probir, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/16/2016 1:19:00 AM

Many thanks LINDA. ....love..probir....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:17:00 PM

You did a good job with this one, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2016 11:59:00 PM

Thank you....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2016 8:48:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats..Sara

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/11/2016 8:34:00 AM

Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Vlad...

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 2/26/2016 12:04:00 PM

Lovely! Sir. Warm regards, Bobby

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/22/2016 3:34:00 PM

Human folly indeed! I think this particular folly is rather an epidemic on society ... too many broken hearts, not enough mending, and too much throwing away. Good than-bauk and good luck!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2016 3:35:00 AM

True. Thank you...