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Sing me a song of a world in which everyone is equal Read to me from a book of harmony that has a sequel Tell me a tale of people who live a happy balanced life Show me faces of men and women untouched by strife Mathematically, an equation deals with variables and a solution Environmentally, a well balanced world would have no pollution Equalizing factors would never be determined by color or age Every human would be treated alike, giving no cause for rage Nature balances our climate; Spring is the time of new birth Heat of Summer brings the rains, giving life to Mother Earth Autumn is impartial, displaying fallen leaves in colored hues Winter paints a cooler world in snow whites and icy blues. Equations must be balanced, correct if both sides are the same. Problems must be solved by everyone so peace we can claim. Variables exist but all factors need values that can be measured. It's the only way a viable solution will be found and treasured. ======================================= March 4th, 2016 Equation Contest by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 3/14/2016 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Lin
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph, and congrats to you as well. ;)
Date: 3/14/2016 5:21:00 PM
Lin, back to say congrats, I knew it would be a winner :)-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, and congrats right back to you, Luloo.
Date: 3/7/2016 10:09:00 PM
This is charming. I would love to read the sequel myself. You did a great job, taking on this equations theme, and turning it into a poem about humanity's problems, and Lin's proposed solutions.
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Date: 3/8/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thanks, Tim, but there'll be no sequel if no one buys the first installment. Hope you're doing well.
Date: 3/5/2016 1:51:00 PM
Great write for the contest good luck ! Hugs
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Date: 3/5/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thanks my sweet friend. Hugs back!
Date: 3/5/2016 9:41:00 AM
Lin, I am struggling with an idea for this contest and you mastered it superbly. Well done and gl in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/5/2016 1:23:00 PM
Don't struggle, just let your mind seek balance. How does that happen? thanks, Luloo.
Date: 3/5/2016 6:48:00 AM
Out of all of your poems I have read so far, this is my favorite. So much valuable information spoken as truth and heartfelt. Leaves a positive message and worded excellently as always.A7+ for me ,Lin and a fav. Thanks! Peace:)
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Date: 3/5/2016 7:25:00 AM
That is quite the compliment, Danny. Thank you very much for your kinds thoughts, as always.
Date: 3/4/2016 11:44:00 PM
Lin, this is wonderful, beautifully penned and deep and powerful, love the poem and the quote, best of luck in the contest, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/5/2016 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very kindly, Constance. I'm not sure what is expected for the contest, but it's what came to mind. Your comments and rating are generous.

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