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Human Being

I walk a mile to see the self in me that I believe to be, I knew the road I choose to lay my head to sleep is called my home, times in need I could barely see that in myself I will set free, the act that held me down, something about me I could not see, I lived a life when I decide that day I said that I don't care, so young, so bright, I dim my light, traumatized for me to share, love me please regardless of what you heard and what you have seen, friends say that I'm only human, yes you're right, a human but who am I being? My life will move in the direction I choose, this I know I have always been taught that I choose to be a winner or lose, its entirely up to me its all in my thoughts. Ken Fepulea'i

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/28/2016 9:08:00 AM
KEN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:55:00 PM
Ken, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:12:00 AM
Nice one! I enjoyed it
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Ken. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to new members. good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/25/2010 9:57:00 PM
Hi everyone, thanks for your comment, much appreciated :) Hope I do write another one as I wrote this 2008 and did not plan to write anything else, my friend made me post this up, so I did for her sake. But to read the comments made me feel much more appreciated so thank you all once again. Maybe I will be inspired to write again, but as for now it is not on the agenda. "our lives will move in the direction of our thoughts" Happy day to you all :D
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Date: 10/25/2010 6:48:00 PM
Hey Ken Welcome to the soup. I love the way you put this together. excellent write can't wait to read more
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:37:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ken. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2010 8:08:00 AM
strong write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/25/2010 5:50:00 AM
Vice write on the challenges of life penned well, Ken
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Date: 10/25/2010 5:48:00 AM
Very interesting and expressive thoughts on Human being, Ken
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