Human

A game of conflict played on earth Id battles Ego to find mirth Will a soul be won or lost? Life's conflict poisoned to it's end Can't find joy, always on the mend God holds your soul at all cost. 5-10-2012 "Tail-Rhyme"

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/14/2012 1:17:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the tale and its endiing here Tom, Also see you've bagged a win with it..! (well done)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 2:06:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Tom. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2012 12:54:00 PM

That Id and Ego brings me grief some days or maybe most days..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2012 9:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the winners' circle, Tom.

Tom Larrow
Date: 5/14/2012 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, I truly enjoyed reading "A State of Mind" it's all in your perception! Congrats on your excellent poem and well deserved win.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/14/2012 7:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Tom. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/14/2012 3:55:00 PM

And he holds it safely always, if we let Him. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/14/2012 11:57:00 AM

Congrats Tom on your win.Very good Tail Rhyme.

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/14/2012 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tom!! huggs, deb

David Williams

Date: 5/14/2012 11:32:00 AM

Tom , congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2012 7:21:00 PM

Tom, enjoyed stopping by..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2012 2:49:00 PM

Well done rhyme Tom, and good words.- oxox hug Anne-Lise