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Hum a Little Moonbee Tune

I bet moonbees sting And zap when they zing I'll wager it's true They love flowers too... In hot Texas heat At high-noon we meet She guns me down cold With bullets of gold

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 7:42:00 PM

Nice tribute

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/31/2009 9:44:00 PM

Boy, boy, boy. Tremendous! lol ...so hilarious. And those comments...very,very hot.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/27/2009 6:06:00 AM

Debbeeee... I taak mo dan silvah bullet to knock dis ole swamp-rat down...din we git rhaahd back up and start gnawin' agin, sha! (I wish!)...You got me started on dialect stuff, you know! Thanks for the comment! - Tim

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/25/2009 3:28:00 PM

Oh... I Forgot To Mention ... I Do Indeed Love Flowers (Haven't You Heard Of 'The Yellow Rose of Texas LOL) This is Definitely Going Into My FAVORITES .... MoonBee

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/25/2009 3:26:00 PM

Tim, Timmy ... You Killing Me Boy... I'm Speechless ! (But In A Wonderful Kinda Way) Smile... I Love This Poem, Tim. You Got Me In Your Sights - So To Speak (LOL) Funny You Should Mention High Noon (I have that in one of my poems... Let You Know Which One- Smile) Oh, And Thank You For Giving Me High-Calibre-Gold Bullets - I Only Go For The Gold Ha Ha... And I Promise, If and When We Meet ... I'll Be MoonBee Sweet (smile) Your Poet Pal ... MoonBee

John Freeman

Date: 10/23/2009 9:03:00 PM

Maybe so Tim, Watch Out! Hilarious, Sincerly Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2009 5:31:00 AM

Delightful rhyme Tim >> James

Donna Golden

Date: 10/22/2009 10:41:00 PM

"She guns me down cold with bullets of gold".....LOVE IT! Hugs, Donna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2009 4:39:00 PM

spicey mind picture..why bullets of gold? are you a different kind of man? I know silver bullets are for werewolves? LOL Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2009 2:43:00 PM

MoonBee is going to love this when she sees it. She is a darling. Thank you for sharing Tim. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/22/2009 2:03:00 PM

guns you down cold with bullets of gold.like stinging you wasnt enough..lovele poem..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/22/2009 6:16:00 AM

Tim, I've never seen a "moonbee," but I love the way you describe the way they interact with flowers, yet have the power to gun you "down cold With bullets of gold." Awesome writing, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2009 4:11:00 AM

Interesting write about a Moonbee. Keep writing. Sara