Hugs That We Once Shared

Hugs that we once shared, lasted just a glimpse in time
If only I could read her mind, and imagine what I'd find

Would I find a woman of truth, or a woman of trust
Or a woman with a mind, whose mind has turned to rust

To drift into another's world, and promise them the earth
Hugs that we once shared, does it really make them worth

They only lasted a glimpse of time, happened they never should
If I could turn back time, your damn right I would


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Date: 11/24/2014 5:57:00 AM
when our trust broken and seems things aren't the same anymore we do hope to turn time.. tobturn time is impossible all we can do is to face and have the choice of either to let go or continue pushing.. .
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:41:00 AM
Life is lived for a reason, tomorrow is lived for the living, James :)
Date: 10/28/2012 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem James. Lots of emotion here - I feel ya.
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 PM
there are two good reasons for turning back time. and you just named one of them.
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Date: 4/1/2012 12:29:00 PM
Ah, the capricious woman seps lively in your poem James. If nothing else, she makes life interesting. Loved the feeling in this! Lizzy
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Date: 3/22/2012 11:22:00 AM
This one made me think..I am wondering of whom he is speaking or if he is just writing?....Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:00:00 AM
So much depth here,I can read your thought and feel the emotion, when our trust is shattered by those we love most.. We definitely want to change back time.. I do believe there's always a better tomorrow on hold my good friend-Charma
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:59:00 AM
amazing deep feeling..pd
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:15:00 AM
Smile ˜ If I Could Gather The Fruits In Your Blooms Or Would That Be Looms? ˜ Surely, I Also Would Turn Back Time To Gaze Upon Your Lovely Splendours, In Sweeet Fragrance As You Exit The Shower With Your Long Golden Legs, Freshly Shaved ˜ No Need For Towels ¥ My Love, John!:) ˜
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:02:00 AM
Smile ˜ If I Could Gather The Fruits In Your Blooms Or Would That Be Looms? ˜ Surely, I Also Would Turn Back Time To Gaze Upon Your Lovely Splendours, In Sweeet Fragrance As You Exit The Shower With Your Long Golden Legs Freshly Shaved ˜ My Love, John!:) ˜
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:37:00 PM
You will find love again James, this is a lovely written poem - alot of hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:06:00 PM
beautifully written and touching piece James
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Date: 3/15/2012 11:00:00 AM
wow, what a thought provoking scene, my king... deep reflections that sway with your lyrical words... amazing!..:) huggs!
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