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Grand Canyon huge hole Rainbow seen there high in clouds Promise no destruction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/8/2009 12:23:00 PM
sounds extremely beutiful
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:16:00 AM
Rainbow is a sign of no destruction. Sara
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Date: 10/3/2009 6:15:00 AM
Hi Sara,That Grand Canyon?As grand as your writing,and higher than the clouds;your poetry's so beautiful:whiter than shrouds.Thanks for your comments!As usual perfect. God Bless, Prince
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Date: 10/1/2009 8:01:00 PM
If you ever have the oppertunity to go to the grand canyon its a must see very well preserved nature at it;s best again well done............kate
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Date: 10/1/2009 6:19:00 AM
Never been there Sara,..only seen pictures,...great poetry though ! james
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:22:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Sara.Rgds brian
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:53:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 9/30/2009 2:12:00 PM
Hi Sara,Beautiful Haiku,the contrast is marvelous ,the reassurance is comforting. It is a great place to visit.Best wishes. Pl.check out my "To the Rainbow".
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:47:00 PM
Sara, one day i will visit the Grand Canyon. It's one of my wants, to experience the heat during the day and the coldness at night, McWow!! >> James
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Sara, Love, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Sara. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:22:00 AM
Hopefully it'll endure....A wonderful sentiment, Haiku, Sara! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/30/2009 4:21:00 AM
Good write, never been there, but want to go someday! "The Chivera" that is just what that dog was, a guard dog. Ranch Escondido in Marfa, Texas, I was ranch foreman there for 5 years. There were mountain lion and coyotes, never lost a goat...had a small bell on it's neck like a cow bell, very smart dog...Thanks Danny
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