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Hubby and Wife's Fantasy Filled Day

"Hubby’s fantasy football day, a wife’s date with fifty shades of grey." Monoku Madness - Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 17 Syllables Date Written: August 20, 2016

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Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2016 9:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 3:52:00 PM

ha ha ha good lone Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/22/2016 9:47:00 AM

Yes,both win and relish their time:)Congrats on your win Laura!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2016 9:40:00 AM

Another creative and witty monoku, Laura:) ~ Congratulations on a truly worthy win. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 7:19:00 AM

Very good luloo! Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )

Janis Thompson

Date: 8/21/2016 10:57:00 PM

Thanks for the hubby, anyway. Congratulations

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 9:20:00 PM

Funny one thanks so much for your entry!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 9:01:00 PM

I'm with , Andrea, with the door closed . Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:20:00 PM

in separate rooms. That is the american way Good one, Laura. Congrats.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 7:56:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your nice win in the Monoku contest! Great one! Hugs, Sandra

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/21/2016 6:39:00 PM

Did you mean Grey Cup? Lol congrats on your Win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 5:13:00 PM

Hi Laura , I enjoyed this one- liner. I can't for "Fifty Shades Darker". I read all three of the books. Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis