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How You Doin Hard-Rock Crossover

Hay! Baby (scream/loud) How you doin! (loud and sharp/stretch-out) My name is Joe cool (he winks his eye (lie) and I want too spend a little time, with you Oh Yeah! (guitar: Hard Rock Sonata) so don't tell yo mama (high pitch /crowd joins in ) and don't spill-it to all of your friends and we, can play hide the one-eyed snake in the little bitty cave and if you don't like that game maybe something nice and sweet we can, just sit here and have something to eat and for dessert what would you like to slop on I've got, just what you want I've got just what you would like a multi flavored lolly-pop because you been so nice How you doin! Next! (a chuckle and a laugh) My name is Joe cool

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Date: 2/4/2020 9:06:00 AM
Caren is "all" right. This is a bad boy. Go home and make cookies. If there is extra time, start a new hobby like crochet. But run. Hugs. and be safe... well written.. if a little scary... Keep your boundaries girl... they are important. So well written. Excellent command of grammar... and rhythm.
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Date: 1/18/2020 12:07:00 AM
"so don't tell your mama" - oh, yes, this is a bad boy. These are the ones so many run toward. Well done.
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 1/20/2020 12:45:00 PM
Thank you - bad boy are something to write about - for sure!

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